Sunday, August 26, 2012

Bella : A retelling of Beauty and The Beast


 I need help choosing a name for Belle. I want a unique but beautiful -bella name. If you have any other ideas please comment. The country she lives in is very fond of exchanging certain "i" or "e" sounds for a "y".

Bellany
Ysabella
Arabella                     
Myrabella  (meer-ah-bella)
Evyrbella   (Ever-Bella) meaning ever beautiful, I thought that might go along with the whole rose idea quite nicely.




Prologue

          Bellany's small arms wrapped around her father's neck as he ran. Carrying her further away from the burning rubble of their small home. The attack had happened so suddenly. Many people swarmed the town's streets, frantically scrambling to escape the onslaught. The assailants were the rumored dark soldiers; said to be from the cursed castle of a broken prince with a forsaken title. Phantom soldiers of legend who were said to be so distant from human that they were the very spawn of evil themselves. Bellany buried her face into her fathers wool coat. Tears soaked through the thick fabric as she tried to force the terrible image from her mind.
          There was a small grove of twisted trees just past the modest gate of their home. Bellany's father set her down and pulled the knotted branches over her.
          "Stay here, Bellany! I must go back. The Greydons need my help. You must stay put, no matter what happens." He said, running his hands through her brown disheveled hair. "You must promise me Bella."
          "I promise father." She said, hot tears streaming down her cheeks. "Will everything be alright?"
          "I don't know my darling." He replied, pulling her into his able arms. "I don't know." He reluctantly pulled away from her, kissing her forehead one last time. "I love you Bellany. Never forget that." He swiftly turned and ran back towards the smoldering village that was once their home.
          Bellany crouched in the thicket of mangled wood and laid her head against her knees. She worriedly thought of her best friend and playmate Ryan Austyn, the youngest son of Greydon Austyn. She wondered if she would ever see any of them again. Bellany leaned back against one of the larger trees wishing warmth to her young body during the crisp Autumn night. She couldn't rest. No matter how loud her body screamed at her to sleep. Neither could she escape the horrible image of the burning village as it crept its way into her mind. Despite her efforts she soon found herself falling into the dark abyss of uneasy rest.      

          Misshapen light from the morning sun peered through the branches above and warmed the dew on Bellany's damp clothes. She sat up, her mind whirling for an explanation of where she was. The scent of smoke and cold ashes awakened her to the reality of the previous night's escape. But as she looked around the copse, a chilling realization hit her. Her father had not returned.



Chapter One

          Vincent used to be a normal boy. His long days were filled with hunting, mastering his natural swordsmanship and endless hours of tutoring from a private teacher insisted upon by his mother. For when the time came, he would rule his father's kingdom. But all of it, his future and dreams, were shattered by one foolishly prideful act by his father. He remembered the story well. His mother told him often the talk of his curse before she died. It seemed that she wanted to put in his heart the burning hatred she had for the man who had cursed them both.


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          Once upon a time, in a land far better than the one in which we live, there lived a young princess who had a love for all  people and knew her country well. A country that, sadly, she was never destined to rule.
          Although she loved all she met and they all loved her in return, there was a deep hatred that festered inside her for a single person. A man named Ryolan, betrothed to her at her birth, dooming her to a life where she could never truly love. He was a terribly vain and selfish man. He did not love her for her character or kindness. But he loved her out of pride, knowing he was to marry the most sought after, and most beautiful woman in the five kingdoms. He was a man of trickery and deceit. For he prospered in the  kingdom's riches; eating fine meats and wines, and filling his life with fleeting pleasures. He neglected his wife and young son. And his people slowly died of uncontrollable disease and starvation. 
          Then, one fateful night, as the king was practically drowned in spirits, having been feasting on the grape in it's many forms. A call came from beyond the main gate, which was answered by a sentry nearby. A single old woman with a cloak of rags and deep wrinkles in her skin, stood just beyond the door. She seemed to the sentry to be older than the kings entire stock of liqueur. And the voice which emitted from her lips was more weathered than the stones of the castle's great walls.
          "Please," She said, "might a poor woman find refuge from the biting winds on this winter's night?" The sentry was taken back by the woman's modest request.
          "Woman, can you not see to whose house you have stumbled upon?" He replied, "This is the castle of a great king..." But she held up her hand and said, 
          "I know the door at which I stand. And restate my humble request, permit me, if you would, to speak with your king. Could you not do me the simplest favor?" As she spoke these words, she held out a hand which held a single gold coin. Which she knew was more than the soldier had ever seen at one time in his life. He wasted no time in pocketing the money and guided her to the king's table. When the king saw who entered his vast dining hall he turned to the sentry with frustration in his eyes. 
          "What business do you have bringing this filth in while I'm trying to enjoy myself?" He questioned.
          "Sire,"The guard replied, bowing his head. "She requests a place to stay tonight." The king raised his eyebrows, then suddenly laughed heartily as if someone had mad a great joke.
          "A place for the night!" he chortled, "And what would the old hag have to offer in return for my gracious gesture?" He asked. At this the woman simply smiled and reached beneath her cloak. She met the king's eyes, which shined with the tears of drunkenness, and presented to him a single red rose.
          "This rose," She began, "is the only one of it's kind. It will never whither or die, but it shall bloom beautifully forever. I offer you this rose in return for a warm place to sleep for one night." After hearing the old woman's offer, the king's brow knit in a sharp scowl and he stood abruptly, scraping his heavy wooden chair on the cold stone floor.
          "How dare you enter my castle and insult me with such a worthless offer! Do you not realize that I can have anything I want?! Anything with one word or a flick of my wrist! And you have the gall to offer me a simple rose!" the king sat back down fuming and dismissed them with a wave of his hand. "Take her from my sight."
          "I warn you,"Replied the old woman calmly. "do not be fooled by appearances. Many things are more than what they seem to be on the surface."
          "I said take her out of my sight or I'll..." But as the King turned to face her, the old woman's ugliness dissolved, revealing her to be a beautiful enchantress.
          "Ryolan I have seen that there is no love in your heart."She said, "You are foolish and think of only how to better yourself. I have experienced first hand how you treat others and you shall be given what you deserve. The king cowered in fear and fell at her feet, begging for a shred of forgiveness. But she turned from him and walked towards the doorway. Before she left she said, "I shall place a curse on this castle, that you may one day learn the error of you ways and see yourself for what you truly are, a beast."
          "No!" Ryolan shouted, "There must be another way!"
          "Look into your heart Ryolan." The enchantress replied."You are a monster. If you remain this way your son shall grow to be like you. Leave everything as it is, Ryolan, and you shall only bring sorrow to others. Stay here and love your son. No matter what shall befall you and your family. But the curse may be lifted if you teach your son to love, and someone can love him in return before the rose wilts on his twenty-first birthday." With that she tossed the flower to the cold stone floor and vanished, never to be seen again.


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             Regretfully the king eventually forgot the warnings of the enchantress. He and his wife learned quickly of the curse set upon their small family. All through the night, as soon as the sun set, their boy Vincent would be just like any other child his age. But as soon as the sun would rise each morning he became a horrid, grisly creature. He grew up despising the form he would take at dawn, hiding himself from the rest of the world. Convinced that he would never break the curse set upon him because of his father's cold heart. King Ryolan soon died, never passing on his title to his son, and never having changed his heart.  Vincent cared for his aging mother who loved him very much despite the truth of his being. But she was also eventually taken by time. Soon the human part of him was overcome by the beast, so much that he did not change when the sun went down. So Vincent was doomed to live in his dark empty castle along with a handful of servants who had fallen under the enchantresses spell. A king without a formal title who ruled over a kingdom that no longer existed. He would grow old, and the rose would slowly wilt and die, having never found love. He seemed to have lost all hope. For who could learn to love a beast?






Chapter Two

          Beads of sweat fell down the bridge of her nose as -bella heaved the last bale of hay into the loft. She wiped the back of her hand across her forehead and rested the shaft against the hardwood walls of the barn. 
          "What are you doing out here Bella? You should be enjoying yourself today, not working." Bella turned around to greet the familiar voice of her guardian, Mauryce O'Connor.    
          "You should leave that for Nygel." Nygel Gallagher currently worked as a farmhand on the O'Connor Homestead. 
          "Don't worry about me Mauryce. I don't mind doing any more work, it's the last time I'll be able to be in here for a while at least. And Nygel told me he had some things to pick up in town so I thought I'd save him the time. I'm finished already anyway." Mauryce's old eyes wrinkled at the corners as he smiled.
          "Well then, come inside dear. Jenyce and I have made a surprise for you." He offered his arm and led Bella toward the farm house.
         



Sunday, August 12, 2012

Tetra Key-Book I

This is a novel I'm writing and I'm just saving it on here in case the notebook smudges....enjoy!
(the underlined sentences need revising)



Tetra Key-Book I           
Prologue: Tetragon

            His dark brow is set to a firm, unwavering scowl, and his piercing eyes glint in the last rays of pure sunlight being consumed by the ever blackening and cloudy sky. A black coat billows around his long figure as he leans forward, clenching and unclenching his hands on the railing of a stone balcony; which juts out from a massive building known as the Nexus. The corners of his mouth curve into a bitter smile as he examines the great city he helped create…and destroy.
--+--+--+--

     Status: Negative
          Reload. Search.
     Status: Negative    
          Reload. Galaxy: Andromeda. Search.
     Status: Negative    
          Reload. Galaxy: Milky Way.
                  Planet: Earth. Search.
     Status: Searching…    
     Status: Searching…
     Status: Affirmative. Target Located.

--+--+--+--

Chora's palms clam up with seat as he walks down the empty stone corridor, his footsteps echoing off the walls. His trembling hand once again runs through his brown disheveled hair. and adjusts the thick rimmed glasses ever inching down the bridge of his thin nose. He knocks on the tall wooden door at the end of the hallway after in taking one last breath of tense air. The large hinges creak from the unwelcome strain of his weight. A cold rush of wind easily slices through his white coat rudely pulling him further into the agonizing reality of his ever growing problems as he steps onto the outermost terrace of the Nexus. 
             "How dare you interrupt me in this untimely manner!" A loud voice shouts over the ever advancing wind.
            "Forgive me master Zuradon, but..." Chora barely manages to stutter.
            "You have ultimately failed me Chora." Zuradon says without turning from the railing. "I only saved your miserable life because you were said to be successful." Both their eyes meet in a flat stare; Chora's widen with overwhelming fear. Zuradon's ice-blue irises pierce Chora's mind with such intensity that his knees buckle and his limp body collapses on the cold stone floor. 
             Zuradon's strong hands roughly drag Chora to his feet, and shove him hard against the wall. Trembling, Chora gasps for breath as a forceful hand pins him firmly by his thin neck. "How could you let this happen?! " Zuradon's hot breath as it hits Chora's cheek might as well have been a snake bite compared to the frigid wind as it blew across the vast terrace. "It's been fourteen years! Do you hear me?! FOURTEEN YEARS!!"
             "T-t-target located, s-s-sir." Chora manages to breath through the pressure of Zuradon's vice-like grip.
             "It's been too long! We would have found her years ago if it weren't for your..." Zuradon's grip loosens slightly on Chora's neck and he takes the opportunity to suck in a breath of bitterly cold air. "What did you say?" Zuradon asks through clenched teeth.
             "T-t-target located, sir. we found her." Chora replies in between panting breaths. Zuradon shoves Chora, who nearly looses his footing, towards the door.
             "Why didn't you mention that in the first place?! Send out the Searchers immediately!! They'll not harm her or they'll answer directly to me! And do not dare come back to me until she is within the walls of the Nexus! We cannot jeopardize her safety! Now GO!"

--+--+--+--

            Status: Affirmative. Target Located.
     Location: Galaxy: Milky Way
               Planet: Earth 
               Country: England
               Address: Unknown
               Name: Erin Spring
               Age: 15




Chapter: One

            Brrrrrrrring!!! The five minute warning bell resonated through my brain. I jump backwards cursing the blasted bell that sits just above my locker and fumble with the combination again. I swing it open and shove my backpack inside. Then begin unloading its contents. Geometry, biology, history, gym clothes... the list goes on. After gathering my books for first period, I stick a pencil behind my year. I reach to close my locker but a rough hand slams it open again, turning some eyes in my general direction. But they quickly look away.
            I reluctantly turn around and look up into the eyes of Benjeman Collins. 
 Benjeman is a bully. He wears his uniform how he wants to wear it, and nobody can tell him otherwise. He walks around the school with such power that most everyone turns away in fear. 
           One day he walked into school with the brightest green shoes on. They looked ridiculous with his black uniform, but no one laughed. No one would dare. Not even the jocks; tough guys who could've flattened him in a second. Girls giggling in the corner would quiet and shrink under his glare. I once overheard some hippie-type go-green activists who claimed that he gave them bad vibes. 
          The fact of the matter is that everyone is scared of him. Literally everyone. Except me. I could kick his butt from here to tomorrow and back without blinking an eye. I could actually stand up to him. But I don't, and here's why. I'm not like other girls my age. I can't let him know my secret. Because then, everything would go down the drain. My life, who I am, my history I have yet to discover. They'd lock me up in a cage or send me to a zoo where people would stare at me for the rest of my life. 
          The only one who knows is Loeisa, caretaker at the den, and she doesn't even know half of it!
          "What do you want Benjeman?" I ask him. I would have seemed a little more threatening if I didn't have too look up to meet his eyes. His dark, ominous figure leaned closer to me, if possible, and a wicked smile curved up on the corners of his lips. 
          "You know what I want Narau." By the way my name's Narau. And this guy was getting on my nerves. I'd been giving him my lunch money (I know, typical) for about 2 weeks now to keep him away from Nathan, my ally from day one. But it wasn't working as well any longer. I had to stop this somehow. I stood up as straight as I could from down there and looked him right in the eye. 
          "Make me." I said. For a split second confusion clouded his eyes, but then it was gone. In that moment I realized my mistake. Then the thought crossed my mind. 
          Maybe I should have stuck with the lunch money.

          He grabbed the collar of my school uniform with one hand and twisted so it cinched around my neck. I pulled at his wrist trying to get away, but he shoved me hard up against the panel of lockers. 
          "Think you're gonna try and be tough do ya?" he snarled. 
          "Look, I just..." I stuttered, trying to come up with something.
          "We got a deal here." He said. Frankly I had know idea what "deal" that actually was other than, he's bigger than I am and I have lunch money. "Now you gonna pay up or do I have to teach you who's in charge around here?!"  Behind his head I could see that we were drawing a bit of attention from students walking by. Of course we'd had fights and scuffles in the halls of Fortwalk High School. But never had guy or girl provoked a member of the opposite gender into a fight. It just didn't happen. But here I was, in that very situation.
          WHAM!!!
          I hit him square on in the stomach with my knee. I guess he didn't expect that because his eyes kind of bugged out and he fell to the floor gasping for the air I knocked out of him. More students gathered around and we were soon enclosed in a tight circle. I had to teach this guy a lesson, I wouldn't let him bother Nathan or anyone again.

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          Principal Whitelock's sharp eyes unblinkingly stared at Benjeman and I at the far end of a conference table. His fingers clasped beneath his chin, leaning his elbows on the hard oak. His grey eyes grasped my green ones and studied them. My hands tightened against each other as they sat on my green uniform skirt. I'd never really interacted with Principal Whitelock before, except when I met him the first day of my transfer to Fortwalk. He quickly moved to Benjeman who had been casually glancing around the room with a practiced air of authority. His tall figure leaned back in the chair, arms crossed. The skin around his eye becoming more purple and more swollen than it had a few minutes ago. He didn't bother meeting the principal's eyes. They probably had many times before. But they simply wandered now awaiting punishment.
          The shuffle of shoes on carpet turned my attention back to Principal Whitelock. He'd come halfway down the table towards us and stopped, leaning against the wall arms folded, his eyes never wavering.
          "Do either of you want to tell me what happened?" he asked. I opened my mouth and then shut it again, quickly looking at Benjamen. 
          "Narau?" His gaze softened.
          "No, sir." I replied, hoping Benjamen would get the hint and decide to leave Nathan alone. He turned his head towards Benjamen, the light glinting off the streak of white in his greying hair, which fell down the back of his collar in a thinning ponytail.
          "Benjamen," he sighed, "Would you like to say anything?" Unexpectedly something snapped and the facade he had created was no longer fixed on his face. Benjamen stood up and his chair scooted back and precariously balanced on it's back feet for a moment before resting on the carpeted floor. 
          "I was attacked by a girl! My whole reputation is ruined! How am I..." He shouted, but was cut off by Principal Whitelock.
          "I'm sorry for your misfortune, and hope the bruise on your eye will heal quickly. But I cannot overlook your erratic behavior any longer Mr. Collins." he cooly replied.
          "But she..." Benjamen started but Principal Whitelock held up his hand standing up straight.
          "The matter is closed Benjamen. Unless the young lady has anything to say, I would like to get on with my day." He then looked at me. Here was my chance. To protect Nathan and get Benjamen off my back forever. But if I ratted him out, what rumors would be spread? Would I have to transfer, again?
          "Sir, I only tried to protect my friend." Benjamen moved to make a retort but was stopped again by Principal Whitelock's hand.
          "Go on." he said.
          "There's not much to say sir. I shouldn't have reacted violently, but Nathan is my friend and..."
          "Nathan Clarke?" He asked.
          "Yes sir." All of us at the Den have taken on Loeisa Clarke's name. None of us ever knew our own last name.
          "I trust you Narau. You're free to go." I stood up and pushed my chair back under the desk. "But this will never happen again. Do you understand?" 
          "Yes sir." I nodded and left the room. I could feel Benjamen's eyes penetrating my back as I shut the heavy office door. The muffle of voices receded as I found my way back to my locker as classes were ending. I caught some odd glances from a few students as I made my way down the hall. One of Benjamen's friends hit my shoulder with a not-so-sincere apology and hurried off. As I turned around the corner I almost ran into Drake Cadieux. He hadn't been at Fortwalk very long, only a few months, and he was very secretive. No one really knew anything about him. He stood almost half a head taller than me in a crisp green uniform jacket with the school crest. His dirty blonde hair attractively fell over his forehead. There was something hidden behind his deep blue eyes that I couldn't pinpoint. 
          "Narau, is it?" I nodded unable to find my voice.
          "Um..." He quickly glanced behind my head. I looked back but could see nothing out of the ordinary. A folded piece of paper was shoved in my hand. 
          "Don't open this until you're far away from here." He said. And then he was gone. Lost in the sea of students. I stared after him dumbfounded. What was he talking about, and what behind me could have made him so skittish? I looked around once more and met the eyes of Benjamen from across the hallway. He'd seen the exchange, I'd bet money on it, and looked slightly amused. I pretended I didn't notice his confident smug and started down the stairs to my locker. I quickly grabbed my books, slung my bag over my shoulder and pushed open the front doors taking in a refreshing breath of late summer air. I claimed the bench just outside the front doors of the school building and took out a text book to study as I waited for other kids from the Den. 
          I hadn't read much of my biology assignment when a shadow fell over me. Once again I found my self looking into the eyes of Benjamen Collins. I closed my book as he sat on the bench. Luckily for me my book bag separated us a little. He draped his arm over the back of the wooden slats of the bench. His coy smile unnerved me a little. What trick was he up to now?
          "Looks like we've had a lot of excitement today." He said, with a smile that didn't nearly reach his eyes. "Little Miss Perfect getting in trouble with the Principal, and now would you imagine that, she gets a love note from Cadee-oh." He jeered, purposefully mispronouncing Drake's name. I briefly looked at the note I had mistakenly left on the top of my book bag. I reached for it, but he managed to get it first. 
          "Benjamen you give that back!" I commanded and stood over him. 
          "Oooh, it is a love letter." he laughed. I could feel my cheeks turning red at the humiliation he was causing. Of course it wasn't a love letter.
          "No it's not..." I stopped realizing that I didn't really know what it was.
          "Don't tell me you haven't read it yet." Drake said. The mocking smile on his face growing larger. "Hmm, why not save you the trouble." With that he crumpled the paper in his hand and tossed it behind his back into the trash can that sat next to the bench. I gaped at him. He just smiled and roughly patted my back as he walked away. I ran over to the trash can and looked over the edge. I stared down the small opening in the top. An unwelcome odor hit my nose and I backed away from the canister. I had to get that paper back. 

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          I slowly trudged along the sidewalk reeking of high school refuse. I safely tucked the still folded paper in my skirt pocket. I promised myself that I would only read it when I was completely alone, and smelled better. As I made my way up the front walk of the old Victorian home I couldn't help but admire Loeisa's flower gardens that decorated the yard. Azaleas lined the walk and snowball bushes sat comfortably under the front windows. I walked up the front steps and tried to sneak past the kitchen where Loeisa was making her signature cocoanut oatmeal cookies. But the wood floors of our old house gave me away.
          "Narau what do you think you're doing, back from school and not giving me a hug or even a hello?" Loeisa's arms wrapped around me in a big bear hug, but she quickly pulled back and held my shoulders a full arms length away. "What have you been doing my dear? You smell awful! 
          "It's a long story Loeisa, but it'd be better shared after I have a shower." I hinted.
          "I see, now you run along and come back when you smell a bit fresher." She smiled and her eyes wrinkled at the corners.